#uncaught coolfish

[uncaught-coolfish]

trust

[rwby-confess]

Confession #300

[i-hear-a-sound]

andor episode 10 is like sex to me

[nonbinary-morro]

My mom is the real anti-rwde is my mom for telling me to stop drawing Adam (+ sienna) fanart because it's ""haram"" and ""against god's wishes"" smh 😒

[haveyoureadthisfanfic]

Summary: Set years before the main show, an orphaned little boy, enslaved among thousands in a dust mine, and a mother, tarnished by the very world around her, are unknowingly bound together by the rage brought upon by a single day of inconceivable misery; and when the two finally meet eyes, ten years later— that single instance will go on to change the world as they know it. 

Author: @uncaught-coolfish

Propaganda:

I’m going to be fully honest. This fanfiction might be one of the best I’ve ever read in general and it’s only at chapter 5 as of writing this. It is written phenomenally, first of all. While this fic is SEVERELY more mature than the source material it’s based from, it never feels too edgy or overdone to me, while also never trying to sugarcoat what these characters do go through. Speaking of the characters… wow. I don’t want to ramble too much because I highly recommend this fic but let me tell you this fic writes these characters amazingly too. Like? The author took a character from the main show who had maybe 5~ish minutes of screen time, made her one of the main characters in this fic, and WROTE ONE OF THE MOST INTERESTING CHARACTERS IVE SEEN IN YEARS. Yeah. I mean that too.  Everyone else is good as well, though I don’t want to spoil anything for y’all. Read. This. Fic. Though do be warned, it does go into some extremely “dark” and possibly triggering territories.  (Also, small thing: the worldbuilding is fire)

Also this scene

[dragynkeep]

Au - Penny is still wounded by Cinder but rather than ask Jaune too kill her she pulls a hail mary and yeets herself into the abyss banking on surviving but not knowing the outcome too deprive Cinder the chance to snatch the power and finds herself in the Everafter. Volume continues as is but remove Jaune completely from the mix and give his story line to her where she spends years in the Ever and now having a fleshy mortal body has to deal with the complications that come with it. etc etc.

In the everafter AU, I prefer Penny just staying as an android and skipping over the whole problematic way they made her human.

Her still being injured and just deciding to fall into the abyss works, especially afterwards where she's all alone, hurt, and reeling from everything that's happened.

I'm planning to write a small fic for this AU just because I love it so much, and I've been inspired by @uncaught-coolfish while handling the much bigger AZRE project.

[justkarama]

@bubblinelovechild first credit to this blogger that got me thinking about Adam and @dragynkeep @uncaught-coolfish too

Second I wanna say that I don't like Adam at all I once got accused of being an Adam Stan ( seeker ) there are very few things I like about Adam very few his design semblance theme song and every fight he's been in my opinion is well choreographed that honestly about it

Third I find Adam poorly written not because I think Adam was supposed to be a badass anti hero no I find him poorly written because Adam is just terrible not the good terrible either the idea the abused becoming the abuser oppressed becomes the oppressor is good in concept but bad in execution

Adam in the context of the show is just a crazy psycho ex boyfriend who's abusive there's no actual character behind Adam

We're supposed to believe Adam is consumed by hatred and spite but why

Though One of the problems with Adam actually scratch that the main problem with Adam is that he lacks a backstory take cinder backstory in volume 8 later half Now, yes it's too little too late but cinder backstory is one of the more well written aspects of in v8

It explores cinder character it shows how while yes she's an abused victim she's an abuser she abuses emerald the same tactics her adopted mother and Salem uses on her she does the same thing to emerald

She continues the cycle of abuses her backstory is an open door on her character we get a look at Cinder on a more deeper level but we don't get that for Adam his lack of an actual backstory we get no character exploration on him we don't get that like with cinder

Another problem is the fanues racism storyline Adam is one out two biggest figures in this storyline and that's poorly written itself Adam is the biggest victim of fanues racism his brand on his face that goes nowhere

In v7 in dust mines nothing hints or implies Adam brand Blake just uncomfortable Weiss gives a half ass apology marrow is used to once again remind people hey we fanues have it bad the brand only exits for shock value it doesn't hold any actual weight because it isn't explored no other fanues has a brand like this

The easiest way to actually fanues racism is through Adam the biggest victim of racism we can explore through him how truly bad fanues have it can add depth to both the storyline and Adam character it can finally explain why Adam is the way he is we can finally more angles of Adam character

But instead we don't get that Adam the biggest victim of racism in is just sum crazy ex boyfriend why does he feel the way he does for Blake what is it about Blake that makes Adam go crazy it feels weird

There's also his lack of any real dynamic outside of Blake the reason why Adam is an antagonist for Yang is 🐝 that's it remove Yang relationship with Blake Adam and her have no dynamic no interconnected storyline

The dynamic he should have had is with Weiss till this day it is odd how Adam has no personal vendetta against Weiss it's her family company that literally branded him like property it's her company that's been an enemy to the white fang and has caused the fanues problems yet no interactions at all

Adam had to have known Weiss was Blake teammate I mean Weiss is a celebrity any team she gets on has to be public knowledge yet no acknowledgement on his part or hers

Weiss could have seen Adam Brand and realized how much damage her company has caused to the fanues but nope I don't even think Weiss knows he exists

Adam is so poorly written it's almost sad there's no complexity no newounce no depth no actual character Adam only serves as a means of bringing the bees together his dynamic with Blake isn't even that good

We don't see very much of their relationship Blake grew up privileged with no racism in her life Adam faced it literally the series doesn't do a good enough job about how being a faunes growing up in a world that hates you really affects their characters it's all just surface level

In conclusion Adam is a poorly written character he's good In concept but only really good in concept his execution as a character is bad his dynamics are bad he's never given an opportunity to properly have a good character storyline or backstory Adam isn't spite he's wasted potential because the writers didn't know how to properly write the white fang and the fanues racism storylines

[uncaught-coolfish]

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btw @uncaught-coolfish is my sideblog for criticisms sooooo if you wanna peep that out <3

[nonbinary-morro]

@uncaught-coolfish srry it took forever BUT I FINALLY FINISHED IT :D

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[nonbinary-morro]

@uncaught-coolfish

"I can fix him" not in a "I can make him into a better person" way but in a "if he was my character I would've handled his story better" way

[uncaught-coolfish]

sie(gm)nna female Grindset:

lose your entire family. watch them perish in your arms

isolate yourself from people who could help you for over 10 years, the grind is priority one

see 1 dying child on a mission. kill 300 people and liberate millions

raise that boy. care for him and bring him to good health, better health than you ever expected him to be. so unlike the very boy you lost all those years ago… realize, he reminds you so much of him. of your son. he is like a second child to you, another son. another chance. so you project, you project the countless ideas and dreams you had of what your first son could’ve grown up to be onto him. and he will know no else, for the environment he grew up in denied him any chance of true development. of true compassion, knowledge, love. he is touched and ruined and dirtied clay and you are the crafter. you are all he has left, he is all you have left. and yet in your projection you fail to realize… you are setting this boy up for an unimaginable goal, of being the one thing you could not save, while you are unknowingly burying yourself in a grave of guilt and grief. you can never move on, you only pretend you never had to to begin with. you will dance with the spirits of long gone names till dancing and names and legs are no longer a concept of existence itself. and that boy will grow to resent himself, for he sees right through your want for him. your want for him to be something he’s not…and can never be. he will stand at your side, bathed in blood as you are, and no matter the circumstances will he ever feel worthy. and yet he will grow to adore himself, adore himself to a cocky extent, just as you did. because you love him. you love him more than anyone else and surely, that means he’s special. surely, that means he is not some sick… tarnished and ruined thing, that he too can know the breath of love. and so he will disregard others, all but you. they are important. but not as important as me. not as important as I am in your eyes. and yet it is not him you love, it is the you you want him to be. your son. and he is not that… no one is. and he despises himself for that, as he wants to please you, in any possible way, for he has grown to fear and to know that not pleasing anyone above him leads to horrible, horrible, consequences. he loves you and he loves himself but it is not himself he loves, it is the him he shows you, as your mirror, your pond, for he loves what he’s not and loathes what he is and fears the day you see past the reflected surface and bear witness to what has been right in front of you for so, so long. would you harm it? he fears that of you, deep down, he always did. no matter his love for you he fears all love for him has an extent, a breaking point. a point in which he makes one false move and the illusion, both the allusions of every mask he wears before you and every dream you place upon him, shatter like glass, glass of a mirror that would stab into his skin if you ever heard the sound. and you would never do that. you should vocalize that once in a while. you. would. never. hurt him. would you?

and give that beast a special interest in plants

[uncaught-coolfish]

taur

[uncaught-coolfish]

Shakes him around like a doll. haven’t drawn him in a hot minute

[uncaught-coolfish]

For the rwby ask thing, how you feel about Sun <.<

SUN IS MY LITTLE GUY AND I LOVE HIM

dearly

and he’s got like. my favorite weapon in the whole show. and he’s just A FRIEND AND HE DESERVES BETTER

and the secret question…

does his Maya model look good?

sssuuuuuurrrreeeeee…….? i don’t like the blue eyes though and WHY DID THEY WHITEWASH HIM!!!!!!!! LOOK HOW THEY MASSACRED MY BOY😔😔😔😔

[uncaught-coolfish]

emerald with some fucked up bulldog